REPORT WRITING
Level 2 & 3 Achievement Objectives:
Select and use sources of information, processes, and strategies with some confidence to identify, form, and express ideas.
Show some understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
Select, form, and express ideas on a range of topics.
Use language features appropriately, showing some understanding of their effects.
Organise texts, using a range of structures.
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Welcome to the story about the Haast eagle. If you don’t know much about the haast eagle this is the story and the infomotion for you. The Haast eagle is an excited bird. It had very sharp teeth to bite it’s periods guts open, It had 3 meter wings to swoop down and catch its prey and periods in a snap.
I had a very good quation about the Haast eagle. Does it eat humans. Sieintics to not know if the haast eagle ate humans. Sintecs don’t think they did from the bone of the size of there mouths they think with their sharp teeth they could bite off a fingers when they and sleeping. Yea so sintecs do not know but we never know.
The haast eagle went extent 500 or 600 years ago. It went extinct around the same time as the Moa but it’s not the same story how to Moa was extent. The Haast eagle went extinct from the south island being really dry and not having grass to eat for the other animals that the haast eagle could eat.
How big was the haast eagle. The height of the haast eagle was 2 or 3 meters. It’s wight was up to 13 kilograms. The Haast eagle is the biggest bird in the world but that was 500 or 600 years ago.
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Wow Nico! You have written such a thorough report. It's so awesome to see you enthused about writing. You've organised your writing into paragraphs and used some techncal vocabulary. Your next step is to use the report structure and tone - no pronouns (I, my). I'm so proud of you!
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